John Updike's The Great Scarf Of Birds

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The Greatest Outdoors Some things in nature are truly majestic mysteries to the human mind. The beautiful and puzzling movement patterns of various types of animals is only one example of the wonders that belong to nature. While enduring the hassle of everyday life, many people forget how nature is full of miraculous yet familiar events, creatures, and even ideas. Award winning author and remarkable short story writer John Updike instills a sensation of wonder and enchantment while depicting a magical occasion of his encounter with nature through his ingenious use of lax yet meticulous structure, colorful word choice, and imaginative figurative language in his narrative poem “The Great Scarf of Birds” The cinematic structure of this …show more content…

Updike applies repetition in the line “a cloud appeared, a cloud of dots” (16) which describes the flock in more depth and gives a slight visualization of the occurrences. Also, in the lines “Ripe apples were caught like red fish in the nets/ of their branches. The maples/ were colored like apples” (3-5), Updike again uses repetition but of the word apples to create a comparison between the surrounding environment and other aspects of fall but also applies words describing nature to describe other things in nature. Updike also incorporates alliteration to show the quickening pace of the heartbeat, thoughts, and emotions of the narrator when he begins to make sense of the great flock soaring above, such as seen in the lines “It dartingly darkened in spots, paled, pulsed compressed, distended, yet” (19-20). In these lines, the narrator uses mostly action verbs, which gives the movement and flow of the line a quick and urgent rhythm, to which a heart would beat when excited or nervous. In the line “I lazily looked around” (32), Updike also uses alliteration, but in this sense, he uses it to give a calming and peaceful feel, or to make the heart and thoughts seem to slow down. The narrator’s story-like and precise use of diction, helps the reader to feel and better imagine the atmosphere and mood during the

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