Hidden Ice Creative Writing

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Brilliant white snow rushes under my skis making a soft crunching sound. The wind blows through my dirty blond hair, carelessly tangling it. The smell of pine and fresh snow permeate the sharp frozen air. Beams of sunlight cascade over the powdery slopes, creating a whimsical sparkle. I hurl down the mountain. My mind lost in the moment, taking in every ounce of scenery. What I failed to notice was the large patch of ice ahead, masquerading as harmless snow. I expeditiously continued on my path toward the hidden ice. From an outsider's point of view, I imagine I would have looked much like a cartoon character slipping on a banana peel after my skis finally reached the ice. About seven hours later, I wake laying on a stiff bed in a strange …show more content…

My stomach sank. Oh God, was I dead? “No Braden, she’s not dead,” a deep voice, belonging to my dad, reassures my six-year-old little brother. I try to pull my hands toward my ribs in an attempt to sit up, but in return: an excruciating pain shoots through my left arm; a shrill sound comes out of my mouth; and tears start flowing down my face. “Emily!” I hear a familiar concern-filled voice matched with a pair of light hurried footsteps growing closer to me: both of which I assume to belong to my mother. I struggle trying to sit up to greet her, but she gently pushes me back down on the bed. Lacking the strength to fight, I give in to her touch. “Where am I?” I question …show more content…

“You hit your head pretty hard. The doctor said you have a traumatic brain injury. He said you probably wouldn't remember the accident, or much else for that matter...” her voice trails off. I can hear her sniffling in between her soft sobs. Suddenly a sharp pain in my temples hits me like a tsunami, consuming all of my thoughts. It feels as though there is a knife in both sides of my head. I clench my teeth and shut my eyes in agony. Taking notice of my pain, my mother breaks down, “I'm so sorry. This is all my fault. I thought going skiing would make a great family vacation. I thought this would be a fun New Year's day and now you’re in the hospital. I wanted us to start 2013 in a cool way, but this is a catastrophe. I'm so very sorry. If only I hadn’t insisted on the trip…” She continued loudly wailing, increasing the sting in my temples. “Mom, it’s not your fault,” I faintly breathed, almost completely overtaken with pain. I extend my right hand to her in a last-ditch effort to calm her down. I feel her lips gently press against my forehead, bringing with them a few wet teardrops. Finally the pain completely consumes me, and all my senses fade away along with my

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