Expository Essay Rough Draft: Football

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Expository Essay Rough Draft Football is looked over at a fun, entertaining, and harmless sport, but that is not what it is at all. Nearly 8,000 Players suffer from concussions caused by hard hits to the head each year. That does not sound harmless to you now, does it? It’s not only concussions that hard tackles lead to many players end up with permanent brain damage, and in 2014 alone 8 players died. Football is not something to risk your life over, and if all these injuries continue to happen something has to be changed. “Last year the NFL predicted nearly one third of their players to develop permanent brain impairments.” That means that one third of all NFL players are never going to be able to live the same way again! Football might

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