Creative Writing: Marisa's Vacation

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Marisa pictured her vacation as a peaceful week on the beach with the sun shining and cristal clear water but she never pictured this happening. Marisa and her family had just started their vacation in Florida a few days ago, and they had been enjoying themselves on the beach. While Marisa’s dad and youngest sister built sand castles, Marisa swam in the nice sparkling water that seemed to go on forever. Meanwhile, her mother made sure no one got sunburnt while they were out in the open sun. While building her fifth sand castle Marisa’s little sister’s stomach started to grumble soon after that she started to complain to their mother that she was starving and that she might collapse if she didn’t get something to eat and started to dramatically …show more content…

They also didn’t notice that the farther they had gone the choppier the water got and it started to rock back and forth. Not wanting to fall in Ambria sat down and tried to steady the board, but it was no use and the board started to tip. Both giving out a big yelp Ambria and Marisa fell into the now dark water. Shaking Marisa flipped the board back over and held onto it with her life. Not knowing if something was below her, she tucked her legs to her chest. Ambria managed to get back on the board and tried to get Marisa on to. Yet Marisa was clumsier than ever and wasn’t even close to getting back on. It took all of Ambria’s strength to get her even half way on the board. When Marisa finally got all the way on the board she was exhausted and it took her a while to take in what happened. Still in shock the girls sat board for a while, but soon after Ambria exclaims it was your fault we fell in if you hadn’t made me try and paddle over to those dolphins we wouldn’t of fallen in. Angry now Marisa turns to face Ambria and starts to yell at her soon both are yelling and rocking the board even more than …show more content…

At first Ambria was confused and still angry trying in vain to get Marisa’s hand on her mouth. Then she saw what was going on and stopped in her tracks. As the board steadied once more the girls sighed with relief. Marisa then suggests that she should paddle back to shore because Ambria got to paddle out, to exhausted to argue Ambria agrees and gives the paddle to Marisa. While paddling back to shore Marisa soon figured out that paddling wasn’t as fun as it looked and got tired after a while. Plus, every time she put the paddle into the water she would lose her balance and almost fall back into the water, but knowing that Ambria would make fun of her for being a wimp she kept her mouth closed and tried to paddle as much as she could. As the sun beats down on Marisa and she can feel herself sweat harder and harder, the only thing keeping her going was seeing the shore in sight, and she was determined to get

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