Comparing Writing And Writing In Steven Pinker's The Sense Of Style

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I learned a lot about writing and reading from Steven Pinker’s book The Sense of Style. While I picked up a lot of tips about how to write better from the book, there are several that pop out to me that I intend to implement in my writing. One of them is catching, keeping, and directing your reader’s attention. In my opinion, doing this should make your writing understandable and should encourage the reader to stay with it. One of the methods of doing this that Pinker explained was avoiding confusing, unnecessary aspects of writing. This includes the overuse of nominalization, metaconcepts, and similar obstructing language. By limiting those distractions, Pinker says, writers can better direct the reader’s attention. Another tip I learned from

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