Comparing Spring Offensive and Into Battle

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Comparing Spring Offensive and Into Battle These are two poems written during the First World War by two serving soldiers. They use their own experience of war, their personal and family backgrounds and their previously held beliefs in writing these powerful poems, both of which were published during the conflict. The first poem 'Spring Offensive' was written in 1917 by Wilfred Owen and the second 'Into Battle' by Julian Grenfell was completed in 1915. These poems used the contrast between the new life of spring, with the promise of warmer days to follow and the destruction and brutality of death on the battlefield. In Owens' poem he uses spring as a short introduction to the scene and leads quite suddenly into the horror of death on the front line. He leads the reader into a calm situation where tired soldiers rest before they move forward. The soldiers do not have a care in the world e.g. 'watched the long grass swirl' and 'hour after hour they pondered the warm field' These first verses are a powerful statement by Owen describing nature and all the lovely things it provides e.g. 'warm fields and buttercups'. He then switches the mood dramatically as 'suddenly the whole sky burned with fury against them' to bring the reader quickly into the fury of the battlefield. Grenfell also used the idea of spring but continued with the theme all the way through the poem to the end. He does this because he thinks of war as glorious where everybody has a good time ' It is like a big picnic - it's all the best fun one ever dreamed of' (taken from a letter he wrote to home). Grenfell used the soldiers to express the energy and strength of nature, reflecting the power and growth of spring around, as they approa... ... middle of paper ... ...an feelings, which creates a good picture in your mind. I think that 'into battle' is a more attractive poem because it bypasses all the bad things about war. It tries to make you concentrate on the good side. Grenfell uses a lot of nature to try and keep his poem attractive and interesting. When the soldiers die he says that it is not a bad thing because nature will still look after you. Grenfell saw war in a totally different way to Owen. I think that 'Spring Offensive' is more convincing because it tells you the real facts and thoughts about war. It still uses the attractive side of nature at the beginning, but soon gets onto the more serious side about the battle. It says what the soldiers are thinking about. They are thinking about death and hell and what it is like. The images that Owen creates are very clear, which helps me to imagine the poem.

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