Brent Staples '' My First Victim Was A Woman-White'

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Brent Staples uses his own personal anecdotes in his essay that help support his claim that he is an innocent black man in America that has been a victim of racial profiling. At the beginning of his essay to pull the reader in and uses diction to create this suspenseful tone, only to end of the essay off with him fearing more of what is America’s perception of him than his “victims” fear of him. At the beginning of the essay, Staples it off by saying “My first victim was a woman - white…” This first sentence hooks the reader in and to some degree paints what the victim’s perception of him was especially when Staples describes himself as “a broad six feet two inches with a beard… seemed menacingly close.” He creates this suspenseful scene to build a false …show more content…

He makes anecdotes of all the times when people would suspect that he or his peers were going to cause trouble in a public area when all they were doing was going to a job or just simply communicating with a police officer. Because of these anecdotes, he is creating a lot of pathos in his writing. Especially halfway through the essay his tone changes to a more nonchalant response to being profiled. He gives off that nonchalant feeling when he states “...I was to become thoroughly familiar with the language of fear… On less traveled streets after dark, I grew accustomed to but never comfortable with people crossing to the other side of the street rather than pass me.” It makes the reader question why is behavior like this even acceptable as the victim of behavior like this is feeling as though this is becoming normalized. His essay also has ethos as well, as since he his writing in first person, thus giving off the impression that he is an authority figure over what he is talking about when he hits on the subject of racial profiling, as he has lived through

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