As I Walked Through The Valley Dialectical Journal

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I choose this passage because I love the way it describes the scene in the first few pages of the book. I feel like as a reader I should know from the beginning where the story should take place and have a clear image in my mind so that I can engage in the reading. The author does great job in this passage making it clear of his surroundings by using vivid imagery. Imagery is important not only in the beginning of the book but also throughout the whole book. Starting of the book with a clear image of the setting is a great way to start the book, so that the reader gets a sense of knowledge what is going on in the story rather than being confused or trying to predict. I will use this type of strategy that the author uses in the beginning of …show more content…

I try to walk faster so that I can finally get to my destination but the walked seem like it was taking years to go there. As if the walk through the dark valley would never end. The full moon was shining very bright and the stars were out as I heard the sound of the gust wind, I don’t know why my heart began to beat faster, faster and faster. So then I began to run because of how frightened I was, as I was running I tripped over that seemed to be hard almost as if it was a bone. I fell forward and landed on my face, having my face painted towards the grassy muddy ground. As soon as I tried to get myself up something was licking my ear and screamed so loud that my echo was heard in the valley. I looked to where it was licking my ear and noticed it was a black dog with grey eyes. I was trying to figure out if he was a wolf or a dog but then I noticed his tongue and teeth and knew it was a dog. The dog seemed to want to play with me he immediately continued to lick me as I was scared for my life. I finally got up and walked away because I just wanted to go home where I was safe. The dog continued to follow me right behind me every step of the way. I began to run so that he stopped following but I was wrong he ran with me and even faster than me. He continued to follow me until I was home, I stepped inside my house and he wanted to step inside too. At that point I felt really bad for the dog and let him in. Something about this dog brought my attention so I decided that I would keep him as my

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