Analysis Of Saving Farmland By Herb Field

658 Words2 Pages

The following is an analysis of Herb Field’s editorial titled “Saving Farmland.” The author’s purpose was to inform the reader about Pennsylvania’s program on preserving farmland. His thesis is clearly stated, although it doesn't appear until the third paragraph: “Pennsylvania has the best, most ambitious farm preservation program going, a model for the country.” The author is also trying to persuade the reader that Pennsylvania, even with it’s many problems, does rather well at preserving farmland. In fact, the author further states that, “Pennsylvania is to receive the largest annual allocation of federal farm preservation funds ever made -- $3.9 million.” Despite this seemingly uninspiring subject, Fields communicates well with his readers …show more content…

The author does not give background details on saving farmland, but he makes his point by stating facts that support his opinion. For example, “last year’s farm bill includes a $400 million six-year federal commitment to this effort (farmland preservation), which should prove especially helpful to the leading state in this regard.” Fields gets his point across by stating many useful details such as “including the 5,339 newly protected acres, Pennsylvania now has a total of 263,000 acres preserved in 51 counties.” Fields shows keen awareness of his local audience by stating, “Lancaster County ranks in the top two or three counties in the country in the amount of farmland preserved.” Besides using examples of interest to Pennsylvania readers, the author also makes a hidden appeal to emotion by listing how many counties are protected nationwide. If one does the math, there is preserved farmland in one county per state/territory. Clearly, one would agree that this number is appalling, especially since farming is so steeped in our nation’s …show more content…

He does not address the issue “why are farmers selling” which makes the article unbalanced. The author could have written a more effective editorial if he listed, why farmers are selling the development rights to their land. Field should have included a quote from American Farmland Trust (AFT) to better balance his article. AFT states, “Today, the American farmer receives less than ten cents of every food dollar and sells their commodities for 1950’s prices.” AFT further states, “to recover these lost profits, farmers are opting to sell parts or all of their land to developers.” Had this information been included in Fields' piece, one lingering question would have been answered for curious readers. In conclusion, Field’s editorial was more informative than persuasive in stating that Pennsylvania is among the top leaders in farmland preservation. But he slaps the reader in the face with a simple dose of reality. Once farmland is developed, we forever forfeit land’s use for

Open Document