Analysis Of A Nice Cold Beer Can Bring Is Problems

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On September 30th, 1998, Dan Sernovitz who wrote " A Nice Cold Beer Can Help After Class", and Kristen Frese who wrote " All A Bar Will Bring Is Problems", both published article in The University of Maryland Student Paper, The Diamond Back. The students debated whether or not the student administration should allow a bar on campus. Dan Sernovitz is for the bar, while Kristen Frese is against. Dan Sernovitz utilized persuasive techniques such as cause and consequence and creating a shared identity. Frese too cause and consequence, creating a shared identity, and also pathos. In my opinion the students would be more persuaded by Kristen Frese. Dan Sernovitz used cause and consequence the most in his article by saying "campus would be a whole …show more content…

She states " the other half of this column can attest to my beyond drunken state just this past weekend." In my opinion she added this detail to say yes I drink, but does that mean I feel the need for a bar on campus? Frese moved on to show her experience in the bar scene. "When I tended a bar, I saw the most docile of people Bust out swinging after a little bit of alcohol." By saying this she proves anyone can become someone else under the influence of alcohol. Creating a shared identity help Frese show she wasn't just looking to ruin everybody's dun time, but protect the students on campus. Frese showed another persuasive technique called pathos. She makes the students put in prospective what kind of imagine the school should have. She ask "is this really the image we want on campus or want campus visitors to see when they stop by?" She then evoked fear in the students by saying " any Peeping Tom, Dick or Harry, along with Jane Doe" could come on campus. She brings to the light that the campus already has a drunken reputation. Why would the students want to encourage the rumors, and make them even more

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