Aboriginal Women Thesis

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Topic: Missing and murdered aboriginal women in Canada Thesis Statement: Given the struggles aboriginals have had to face in Canada, the Canadian government should take action to solve the hundreds of cases of missing and murdered aboriginal women, as it will strengthen the relations between aboriginals and Canadians. Introduction • Opening Hook Line: Aboriginal women deserve basic human rights and attention from the government. • Narrowing towards thesis: “Aboriginal women between 25 and 44 are five times more likely to die a violent death than other women.”( The Tragedy of Missing and Murdered Aboriginal Women in Canada). • Thesis: Given the struggles aboriginals have had to face in Canada, the Canadian government should take action to …show more content…

There are also a high number of Aboriginal women working in the sex trade. • Quote: “Aboriginal women being highly overrepresented as sex trade workers; racism compounds the threat to safety and security faced by all such workers.”(Mann par. 8). Section 2 Heading: The Role of the Authorities Part 1: Canadian Police (RCMP) • Supporting point: The Canadian Police views the Aboriginal community as a community that does not deserve protection because of high crime rates, instead they view it as the rest of the country needing protection from the Aboriginal community. The Canadian Police tends to do very little when an Aboriginal woman is reported missing, they often suggest the family to wait for the missing woman instead of taking immediate action. In addition, few police forces have special protocols they follow when an Aboriginal woman goes missing. • Quote: “[ . . . ] most police officers need a fair and open attitude towards those working in the sex trade and must learn to treat street people as human beings—with dignity and respect.” (Harper par. …show more content…

The amendments were intended to rid the Act of sex discrimination; nonetheless, the provisions still discriminate against women and their children and are damaging for First Nations communities.” (Mann par.11). Part 2: A Deeper Issue than Domestic Violence • Supporting point: The RCMP states that Aboriginal women who were victims of homicide knew their killers in 100 percent of the solved cases. It is a fact that violence in the family is a huge factor in the abundance of missing and murdered Aboriginal women, however, it is not only exclusive to Aboriginal families. Family violence plays a role in the amount of missing and murdered Aboriginal women but a high number of strangers are involved in the crime as well. • Quote: “Between 1980 and 2012, 62 per cent of aboriginal women murders involved a spouse, family member, or "other intimates."But that number increases to 74 per cent in the case of non-aboriginal female homicides.” (Kurjata par.17).

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