A Big Life

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How much is the burden of student loans affecting the personal lives of students after completing their education? The degree to which a person will have a financially successful future is largely depended on getting a good education. However, not everyone can manage to pay for that education. Therefore, students often resort to taking out student loans to help them compensate for their education. According to some sources, the average amount of student debt is equivalent to the price of a new car. Like many other Americans, Wearing Thin faces the same problem of repaying those student loans without family support and claims that the loans “are the cause of almost every stress in [her] life.” Not only does she associate her student loans with stress, but also states that her life is defined by her student loans. In the article “A Big Life”, Thin seeks advice and reaches out to Cheryl Strayed, a writer, and asks her for her perspective on the situation. Cheryl, referred to as “Sugar” in the article, writes back claiming that she too is a victim of student debt. She forms a connection with Thin and provides hope by advising her to accept the student loans and to move forward from there. By establishing her credibility through sharing her life experiences and appealing to emotions through the use of empathy, Sugar attempts to inspire in Thin a sense of hope for a brighter tomorrow.
Sugar, in order establish ethos in her response, immediately asserts her credibility by claiming that she too has been through the same phase as the one Thin is currently in. Sugar starts off her essay with a personal anecdote saying that Thin’s "freaking out” about student load debt is useless. She claims that she too “received zero funding from [her] p...

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...e her a better person, it “gave me faith in my own abilities…They made my life big. They contributed to an education that money can’t buy.” Sugar makes Thin believe that despite all her tribulations, there can also be a positive side to the issue. By providing a sense of optimism for the future, Sugar hopes to be encouraging to Thin by helping her find a way to triumph over her problems.
Paying off student loans is a huge burden to bear especially for young people like Wearing Thin. However, Sugar uses appeals to emotion and asserts her credibility by sharing her story in the hopes of making Thin realize that everything will be fine, if only she lets it. Not only Thin, but thousands of other Americans are going through the same problem of paying off student loans. Sugar’s letter not only serves as a spark for one, but thousands of other people all over the world.

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