Analysis Of Texas Ranger's Empty Heart

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A former Texas Ranger pursues a ruthless outlaw, Empty Heart, during the 1850s California Gold Rush. STORY COMMENTS BLOODSTONE is a proposed one-hour TV Pilot dramatic western. It takes place during the dynamic time of the California Gold Rush during the 1850’s. The Old West comes to life authentically easily transporting the audience back in time. The pilot centers on the idea of a gritty and gusty Texas Ranger’s pursuit of a chilling killer known as “Empty Heart.” While the idea of the law going after an outlaw isn’t new to the industry, the characters in this pilot feel refreshing and compelling, especially Empty Heart. He’s a Native American killer who is chilling and spellbinding. There’s no doubt he can be the next unforgettable TV predator. The formula of the series is clearly conveyed in the pilot. His name is without a doubt chilling and scary. He’s described as soulless. His backstory reveals a lot about how Empty Heart comes to be the warrior he is. The audience feels both repulsed and mesmerized by this character. The only concern about act one is that it ends on very mild tension. Consider ending act one on a stronger note. It’s pivotal, especially if the show has commercials, as the idea is to entice the audience to stay on task with the show versus turning the channel. Thus, one easy solution is to begin the attack at the very end of act one - an arrow, or something to hook the audience. Act two features the major attack by Empty Heart on Ray and his men. This sequence provides solid tension and excitement. It’s a stand out sequence that provides for the chills and show how ruthless, heartless, and soulless, Empty Heart can be. He’s a formidable foe. The flashback revealing a part of Empty Heart’s backstory works well to spellbind the audience. Act two ends on nice emotional tension when Tom’s mother realizes he’s dead and lashes out at

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