Fahrenheit 451 Thesis Statement

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Science Fiction Essay Submission Document
Novel:Fahrenheit 451
Group: G
Essay Topic: Topic 2

Theme 2: We live in a world full of media – our cell phones, televisions, IPods… what is Bradbury’s message about this technology, and its dangers?
You should show how media sources are used and abused in this society – prove that these devices are directly harming the humanity of the users. Be sure to specifically identify traits that are damaged, and analyze the overall impacts. It would also be good to prove that removing one’s self from all the distractions helps someone heal -- focusing a paragraph on this, as a final argument, would be a solid way to prove your point.

Thesis Statement (TS) - Remember, this is what your entire paper will prove. …show more content…

You should be able to read the main idea for a paragraph, say “helps prove that” and then read your thesis statement and have it make sense. Before writing your paper out, you need to know what those three major arguments you will make will be. Below, write the main ideas for your three body paragraphs.
(MIP-1) Most of the adults in society are overusing tv

(MIP-2) the children are overusing tvs and technology

(MIP-3) the people who don't use as much technology end up better

(AGG) How does the overuse of technology like tv affect people in the novel fahrenheit 451?
(BS-1) Adults such as Mildred overuse tv. (BS-2) The children in the society are overusing the technology like tvs. (BS-3) The people in the society who do not overuse technology, generally end up better. (TS) The society’s addiction to technology is what makes them so messed …show more content…

(SIP-A) Mildred is overusing technology like tvs. (STEWE-1)Mildred overuses technology like tv and she is addicted to it. “She had both ears plugged with electronic bees that were humming the hour away. She looked up suddenly, saw him, and nodded. You all right? he asked. She was an expert at lip-reading from ten years of apprenticeship at Seashell ear-thimbles”(16).She only uses technology and she has used her headphones for so long that she became really good at lip reading and this takes a lot of practice which shows that she is clearly addicted, and over using the headphones if she learned to lip read just from them. (Stewe-2)Mildred sees the tv as real people."Now, said Mildred, my `family' is people. They tell me things; I laugh, they laugh! And the colours!"(69)Her thinking that the tv is real people is clearly showing that she is overusing her tv since for her to think that a tv is her “family” she needs to spend more time with it than with her actual family, which proves that she overuses it. (Sip-B)Mildred and her friends overuse tv.(Stewe-1)Mildred and her friends rely heavily on tv.“The three women fidgeted and looked nervously at the empty mud-coloured walls.”(91)When the tv was turned off they became nervous and fidgeted which shows they are horrifically socially damaged from overusing the tv this much.(Stewe-2)People us tv to help with things they should not use it for.“Clara, now, Clara, begged Mildred,

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