Not The Furniture Game and Mother, by Simon Armitage

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Simon Armitage uses metaphor in many different ways in Not The Furniture Game and Mother.... He uses them to describe and build up characters, in most cases; he doesn’t use much narrative and instead uses metaphor to help you build up your own story, so the interpretation varies and creates a much larger story from such a small poem. Armitage uses metaphors as a simple listed comparison as well as an extended metaphor which continues throughout the whole poem. These lead to a strange structure as it is unrhymed. In Not The Furniture Game, there is also no obvious rhythm, however there are many poetic values of it such as how it is punctuated.

In the descriptive metaphors in Not The Furniture Game, Armitage builds up character very effectively using many semantic fields which link the man to a main field of terror. His shoulder blades are described as “two butchers at the meat cleaving competition.” This creates the image of him being a sharp, dangerous character. The description of his dog being a “sentry box with no-one in it” tells us even his possessions were scary, dangerous and the empty sentry box suggests they were soulless.

There are also many anthropomorphic metaphors. These make him sound disgusting and unquestionably abominable, like his toes which were “a nest of mice under the lawn mower.” This tells us how his toes are large and plagued, possibly very hairy. It also builds the picture of revealing this “nest of mice” by moving the lawn mower which represents something hiding his feet, conceivably his shoes.

The poem evidently suggests he was a very careless and rude speaker as it says he has the tongue of “an iguanodon.” The reference to this shows a strong harsh tongue as iguanodons are large and bulky which conv...

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...lso be very dangerous and easy to lose control however, unless you get accustomed to the difficult skill which could take a long time.

The allusion to “fingertips” grabbing the “last one-hundredth of an inch” shows the desperation with which the mother is clinging on to the ‘control’ she has over her child.

The “endless sky” the child is reaching for signifies infinite opportunities and experiences once freedom has been accomplished. This is where the child could fall or fly, which means he could succeed or perish in the harsh atmosphere of life.

Armitage experiments with metaphor in two different ways. The listed metaphors leave you with many different stories which could be created, however the extended metaphor creates a clear story in your head, though it hints at the story both literally and metaphorically and leaves the reader to push them together into one.

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