analysis of john maloley

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I was inspired by Susan Hill’s ‘The Woman in Black’ to write a short novel extract. The Woman in Black focuses on the protagonist, Arthur Kipps who is the hero of the novel and tries to defeat the ghost who in this novel, is the villain. I decided to explore the uses of characterisation and the hero-villain idea by reversing the roles so in my novel extract, the protagonist is the ghost and will also turn out to be the hero. I set my novel in the same era of which Hill set her novel, presumably the 19th Century however of this we are unsure as there is no fixed evidence in her writing.

As the extract I have written is the opening of a novel, I tried to effectively engage the readers interest and set the scene for the rest of the novel. I used pathetic fallacy to do this by opening with a paragraph setting the scene with pathetic fallacy such as that ‘the wind blew cold and harsh’ and it ‘fiercely pierced through his skin’. This is similar to the beginning of chapter 2, A London Particular in The Woman in Black. Hill uses the fog to build up suspense and let the reader believe that the fog and overall ‘gloomy’ weather is hinting towards the negative things about to happen later on in the novel. This is the effect I have tried to create in my own writing especially when the ‘snowflakes melted as they met the intense heat from inside’ which shows that the snowflakes which are ‘gracefully fluttering’ come to an ‘abrupt end’ which is a warning to the reader that even when things are going smoothly later on in the novel, all is not what it seems and there will be an abrupt, negative end, just like at the end of The Woman in Black. This type of ending is often used in the gothic horror genre and John Maloley will be no different.

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...f pathetic fallacy, the hidden secrets and lies and determination to find a solution just peaking out towards the end of the opening. I feel that the scene the novel has been set in is very effective as it hints towards a more negative ending and leaves the reader feeling uneasy and on edge which is what the genre is all about. however I feel that more aspects of the 19th Century could be woven in such as how Hill writes about the ponies and traps as the mode of transport. This could however become more evident later on in the novel. The Woman in Black has inspired me to create a chilling gothic ghost story and to work on the weather and location which is very similar however, by using a ghost protagonist instead, overlooking the whole situation from a different point of view whilst still incorporating the usual ghost story features.

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