The two poems I have chosen to explain are Piano by D H Lawrence and

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The two poems I have chosen to explain are Piano by D H Lawrence and

In Mrs Tilchers Class by Carol Ann Duffy; I have chosen these two

poems because they both tell us about the same sort of memory, i.e. of

a good time in their childhood.

Moving on to the mood of the poems. Both poems are very emotional and

although they are both happy memories the emotions vary, for example

in 'Piano' the poem is very sad and nostalgic 'till the heart of me

weeps' as the poet wishes that he could return to those presumably

happier times, on the other hand 'In Mrs Tilchers class' is very

childish and as in a dreamy world 'the laugh of a bell swung by a

running child'

The mood shows the intention of the poems. In 'In Mrs Tilchers Class'

this was to recreate the safety warmth and happiness of childhood

innocence and how it all changed at the end of primary school 'the

inky tadpoles changed from commas into exclamation marks' I believe

this symbolizes the change from a child into an adolescent. However in

'Piano' the poem is showing us how the past will always shape us he

tells us how we can never go back to the past 'I weep like a child for

the past'

The structure and the form support the intention of the poems. In 'In

Mrs Tilchers Class' the structure is very simple and easy to

understand, there is no rhyming scheme, four octets and eight

syllables to a line this helps to recreate the idyllic primary

classroom by being very simple like the sort of things that a young

child would be learning about. However 'Piano' has a very complex

structure, in comparison, and although again the syllable count is

random the rest is not so, there are three regular quatrains each with

rhyming couplets.

In particular the poets style shows us how they feel. In 'piano' the

poet's style is one that is very emotional to do this, the poet hast

used lots of emotive language 'weep' and 'flood of remembrance' also D

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