Summiting Me Descriptive Writing

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Summiting Me
Mountains were easy to climb. I’d been on hikes before, and pain and fatigue weren’t problems. I knew I’d be on top of Mt. Hyndman by the end of the day, so why worry? We had gotten to the trailhead the previous night to the hike. My brother, father, and I, along with some cousins and uncles, were fatigued from the long drive and needed rest. Camp was made and everyone piled into their tents to refresh themselves for the long hike ahead. Early in the morning, we struck camp and headed out on our climb. The trail started off peacefully, meaninglessly meandering through thickets of willow trees and patches of tall shifting grass. It was dim, but the markings of the well outlined trail were unmistakable. Through the trees and past the looming peak, the sun broke through the clouds and pierced the frigid state of the morning. It was so …show more content…

Over the next several hours, we worked our way up onto the saddle that looped down in between our mountain and another smaller one. As we reached the top, a bitter wind billowed though us, fighting its way into the thin hiking jackets everyone had worn. To our left was the peak, a pile of large and small rocks expanding upwards into the dark clouds, and in front of us was a thousand foot drop that curled my stomach into a tight fist as though it could hold me firmly attached to the slick stones. As we started up the steep incline, I began to give up. The cold assisted by the sneering wind bit at my fingers and toes as pieces hail started to pelt my face. We still had a thousand vertical feet to ascend. When this thought crossed my mind, that was it, and I was turning around to descend to the well protecting trees below, but then my Father stopped me. “Son,” he said over

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