Society: The Puppet Master of Freedom

Throughout history there have been countless cases where groups of people have fought for their freedom. They have fought their battles in political debates, protests, and in the most extreme cases war. The oppressed continuously try to escape their oppressors, under the assumption that their oppressors live in complete sovereignty. People did not know then and still do not understand today that the environment they inhabit is the key factor that controls communal freedom. In Wallace Stevens “Disillusionment of Ten O’ Clock” and Walt Whitman’s “Song of Myself” both speakers affirm that society does not allow individual freedom to exist in this world.

The speaker in “Disillusionment of Ten O’ Clock” (Stevens) places the readers in a position that is crucial to the way that he wants them to perceive of the environment. The poem is written in free verse, a decision made by Stevens to invite his readers to come away from rules; not even writing should be controlled by what thy neighbor thinks.

During the poem the speaker does not address his readers. The readers are simply overhearing a man assessing the society in which he lives as he daydreams about what is could be and yet what it is not. It is evident that his goal is to get the readers to look down upon this society which is so caught up in daily routine; prohibiting anyone from having freedom of imagination. This detachment that is created between the speaker and his readers incorporated with the boring monotone at the very beginning of the poem gives the readers a negative impression of the society before they begin to analyze the actual words of the poem.

Stevens chooses to convey his message through imagery and figurative language. The speaker introduces his soc...

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...Verse 24, Line 18-19). Whitman shows that to lose that bond is to lose all freedom. Thus far Whitman never tries to be like a god in this poem which is a common attribute of a typical conqueror. He points out that he is a kosmos yet he is, “…no stander above men or women or apart from them…” (Verse 24, Line 16) creating this equality among all men including himself.

This very equality is what keeps all societies affecting each other’s individual freedom. For Wallace Stevens this is a nightmare and wishes he can escape outside the box; whereas for Walt Whitman this is a blessing to be connected in such a spiritual way and know that connection between on another will never fade. Regardless of the difference in views the fact remains that both these poems have given proof that the environment around you will always play a key role in the freedom you experience.