Rhetorical Analysis Of The Death Penalty By Senator Strom Thurmond

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The use of the death penalty as a punishment for committing murder in the United States is a very debatable topic. In “Death Penalty,” Senator Strom Thurmond’s claim is that the United States should have a federal death penalty. Thurmond argues that if there was a Federal death penalty in place there would be less violent crimes. Although Thurmond uses logical and illogical reasoning, he does not accurately support his claim about the death penalty having a positive effect on violent crime, but he relies too heavily on emotional appeal.
First, Thurmond weakens his argument by not providing a logical answer to persuade his audience that death penalty prevents violent crime. He attempts to gain some support from a Gallop Poll that shows “79% favoring the death penalty for murder"(Thurmond 52). This survey is not valid because it fails to disclose sample size, which states participated, and if there were any bias. Furthermore, the author lacks relevant data to show how many violent crimes were curbed because of the death penalty. In addition, he contradicts his argument by presenting sample cases and stating "in all of these cases, the defendants received the death penalty" but failed to include sufficient evidence of how crime was discouraged. …show more content…

The author chooses not to include cases which occurred in his state nor personal encounters with victims' families. Instead of specifying his state, the author introduced cases from Ogden, Utah, San Diego, and “another case which . . . in Landover, Md., apartment” (52). One can easy discredit Thurmond as he casually omits opposing viewpoints. The author coincidentally did not mention the number of innocent people who were on death row, but later was exonerated because of updated DNA tests. So, it’s difficult to side with the author when he lacks

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