Responsible Citizens

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Alice Elliott Dark’s fictional story “Rumm Road, ” discusses the influence that one citizen could potentially have on an entire community. Dark’s story talks about a group of girls who all happens to be involved in a conflict down on Rumm Road, which is “one in the richest streets in town.” (Dark 3). The narrator and her friends didn’t pay much mind to these girls due to the conflict didn’t directly affect their neighborhood, until it is discovered that one of these girls originated from their community. Dark’s story “Rumm Road” ultimately takes a position on the responsibility of being a citizen. The position that the story takes is that the responsibility of being a citizen is to be more involved and aware with their society. As for this story, it shows how the characters aren’t following their responsibilities until a critical event happens and awakens them to be more involved and aware. This awakening allows the characters to take forth the responsibilities a citizen should have. Dark uses of pronouns in her writing, awareness of the characters, assumption among the characters, and implanting feelings in the characters, she is able to state how citizens in general should be more aware and involved in their society and carry out that as their responsibilities.
In Dark’s story, She repeatedly uses the pronoun “We” instead of “I”. She does so in order to generally speak upon all citizens it applies to rather than just the narrator. In Dark’s opening sentence of her story she states, “We didn’t pay attention to the sirens.” (Dark 1). This sentence indicates that the citizens, the “we”, are not aware or involve in their society. Aware in the sense that they do not even pay attention to the sirens. As sirens usually indicate a signi...

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...the realization that they’re so detached from their responsibilities of being a citizen arise, those responsibilities of being involved and aware of people and event which is around them in their own society. This quote supports the story’s position that citizens need to be more aware and involve in society such as knowing people in the society and events that are currently happening.
Dark is very skilled in creating a fictional story in order to get her position of a subject across. In “Rumm Road”, she was able to support her position on the responsibility of being a citizen. Her position is being that citizens should be more intertwined with their community in a sense of being more aware and involved in what is happening and going on in it. Her overall writing and narrating of her story effectively and efficiently made it so that her position was clear and vivid.

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