My Mother, Who Came From China Where She Never Saw Snow by Laureen Mar

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Factory workers, especially immigrant women, often work very hard for little pay. They continue working day to day, performing the same tasks endlessly because they have no choice. Their diligence and hard work is portrayed in the poem “My Mother, Who Came From China Where She Never Saw Snow” by Laureen Mar. In the poem, the author uses punctuation, irony, and imagery to demonstrate the struggle female factory workers must overcome to meet ends need. The author uses sudden periods and commas to create a rhythm, which makes the reader pause. The rhythm of the pauses mimics the rhythm of her sewing, which makes the poem move along with her. The author states “She pushes cloth / through a pounding needle, under, / around, and out, / breaks thread with snap / against fingerbone, tooth” (Lines 12-14). When read aloud, these lines create a pause, which mimics the rhythm of the sewing machine. The sudden pauses in the poem also mimic the assembly line in the factory. The punctuation in the poem also creates an effect on the reader, making them feel as if they were actually on an assembly line. Mar states “Sleeve after sleeve, sleeve. / It is easy. The same piece” (15-16). When read aloud, this creates an effect on the passage to make it seem like the reader is watching an assembly line. The punctuation in the poem ties together to create an effect on the reader, which makes the passage seem like an assembly line, doing the same thing over and over again. The author uses irony in the poem to demonstrate how the female worker in the factory made ski coats, but she will never see snow. The female worker in the factory makes ski coats, but it is ironic that she makes something for which she will never see. Laureen states “She earns money /... ... middle of paper ... ...air to the thread going through the sewing machine and how dirty the factory is. The author uses imagery to show the reader that in factories, people are not seen as human, but as extensions of the machines in the factory. In her poem, “My Mother Who Came From China Where She Never Saw Snow,” Laureen Mar shows the industriousness and great effort of female immigrant factory workers through her use of punctuation, irony and imagery. All of these elements work together to make the reader understand the hardships these women had to endure: making the same items, day after day, for which they will never be able to afford or have any use for. These women make only enough money to survive. Works Cited Mar, Laureen. “My Mother, Who Came From China, Where She Never Saw Snow.” GGCA English. GGCA English, n.d. Web. 28 Apr. 2014

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