Live Mandate By Audre Lorde Analysis

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Teju Cole’s “Live Update” and Audre Lorde’s “Power” most powerfully use figurative language to persuade others to fight against injustice. The poem “Live Update” talks about the injustices regarding gun violence. In the poem this is specifically shown by the quote, “They are dead now./ They and their various views on the matter,/ swallowed up suddenly by darkness, “ (12-14). The use of end-stopped allows the reader to pause and realize the effects of gun violence. For example the quote mentioned “their various views on the matter” meaning it did not matter whether the victim of gun violence supported guns or not they were still victims which creates a sense of anger and sadness within the reader. Also, because of the connotations with darkness …show more content…

This is shown in the quote,” I am trapped on a dessert of raw gunshot wounds/ and a dead child dragging his shattered black/ face off the edge of my sleep/ blood from his punctured cheeks and shoulders”(5-8). The use of enjambment creates a feeling of suffocation among the reader. The reader feels just a bit of what minorities feel each and every day when they deal with racism. Also the metaphor of “a desert of raw gunshot wounds” helps the reader to understand how it feels to be a minority. The desert can be compared to a place where minorities feel alone and outnumbered, and can not relate to others. Therefore in a way the poet is also creating an image for the reader. Lorde also writes, “raping an 85 year old white woman/ who is somebody’s mother/ and as i beat her senseless and set a torch to her bed/ a greek chorus will be singing ¾ time” (51-54). The image that Audre Lorde created emphasizes the amount of injustice there is between two races. She shows the reader how it is okay to kill an innocent African American ,yet revolting to rape “an 85 year old white woman”. The poet’s choice to choose the white women is more impactful to the reader rather than a white man being shot, which allows the reader to remember the injustice of how these crimes are

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