Creative Writing: Darkness By Elizabeth Crane

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Darkness. There was only darkness for a moment, and in that moment Elizabeth Crane thought, "This is it. I guess this is the end." Elizabeth had been in a coma for 2 very long years. Every second of which she was painfully aware of her condition, but unable to give any sign of her undeniable brain activity. So she had simply been...there. In some type of limbo. And now, finally a change. Although a scary one. Most days she was able to start sensing things around her as well as hear. It could be quite dull now. The only ones that visit her anymore are her parents and her fiancé. Or...he used to...she couldn't tell if their relationship had changed. It was hard to tell these things when you cannot speak, touch, or even blink …show more content…

And it went well. And it killed her. Of course she'd want him to move on eventually, but she never expected to have to see it... The scene changed again. It was now a wedding. There he was at the altar. Waiting there with tears in his eyes, overjoyed. That was what she was supposed to see when she walked down the aisle... But it wasn't her that came walking in when the music began to play. It was the girl from the date. And she looked gorgeous. Elizabeth's fiancé came back into view and he was...crying. He was actually crying. He had cried for neither happiness nor sadness when he was with Elizabeth, but this new girl was making him blubber like a baby. Was he...was it possible that he loved her more than he had Elizabeth? She didn't have time to dwell on this thought because the picture changed once again. This time it was her parents. They were sitting at their dinner table with her brother, just sitting and talking. This may not seem bizarre, but her brother hadn't talked to their parents in years. Ever since he came out, they had pretended like he didn't …show more content…

This time, there were two grooms. Paul and a man she had never seen. He looked overjoyed until he walked up to Elizabeth. As soon as he reached her the light in his eyes dimmed. "Elizabeth, this is the happiest day of my life. But I've got to tell you, I really wish mom and dad were here. I do love them you know. I wish they could accept that this...it's just...who I am." He began to cry, which seemed to be a recurring theme in these clips, but it was still just as powerful. This last image faded back to white and the now familiar voice returned. "The clips are now finished. It is time to make your decision. Whatever you choose you must state very clearly so there can be no mistake." All the visions she just saw flashed once again before her eyes and she thought about all her loved ones. How their lives would be. She looked up broken hearted, knowing there was only one answer to choose. She knew it all along, deep down. "I...choose to pass on to the next life." She had time only for a single tear before the light became blinding

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