Comparison Of The Interlopers And The Lottery

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Tension and surprise is what encourages the reader to keep reading and these two stories can do it well. The author of these two stories use suspense, foreshadowing, and structure of text to create these effects. The first short story is “The Interlopers”, this is a short story about two families that have hated each other for several generations, of those generations come the main characters, Ulrich and Georg, these two also have a deep hatred towards each other. One day though both of them come across each other in a forest alone, and these two were both armed and stared each other with their eyes filled with bloodlust, but before any of them could make a move, a branch fell on both of them and left them incapable of moving, forcing them …show more content…

In “The Lottery” the author slows the pacing by being descriptive on things that aren’t necessarily important to the plot. An example of pacing in “The Lottery” is near the beginning of the story (first two paragraphs) where things are still being introduced, The author chooses to spend a lot of time describing the scenery and how children were recently released for summer break, instead of developing the plot and this is intentional. In “The Interlopers” the pacing is slowed down in the introduction which give a large amount of background on the history of the families then tying it together with the two character we later follow, Ulrich and Georg. This slow pacing continued when the two characters encountered each other and the author gave detailed descriptions on their feelings, weapons, and expressions. The pacing started to speed up after the two characters make an agreement to no longer hate each other and joined forces and started to scream for their men’s help, who were supposedly following them. After their scream both character became anxious for help, and they think that one of their groups have been …show more content…

In “The Interlopers” the author is very descriptive to try and limit the amount of information that you get that progresses the plot, this also helps to control the pacing. An example of this is when the author tells us the rich history filled with hatred that the two families had, another example is when in the forest, where most of the story takes place, is introduced and described. In “The Lottery” the author does similarly, in the beginning the setting is described in great detail and some of the non-recurring characters are also mentioned. Later when the lottery is occurring, the author showcases Tessie and how other people react to her, many times people would see her as odd or someone who just act differently, an example of this can be found when Mrs. Delacroix “laughs softly: (paragraph 8 lines 7-8), or when people near her laugh when she encourages her husband Bill to go up when it was his turn and says “Get up there Bill”(paragraph 30 line 1) But near the beginning a subtle hint to the end is given which give the reader some pieces to put

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