Analysis Of Popular Mechanics By Raymond Carver

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A short story is often made of 6 elements which are the point of view, character, setting, style, theme, and plot. In the short story “Popular Mechanics”, Raymond Carver mainly uses the plot to deliver his story. Although the story is told from a third-person point of view; the narrator is very objective and does reveal any thoughts or feelings of the characters. The story is told mainly through the dialogue of the two characters; Carver doesn’t fully describe the characters which keep them remain static and flat throughout the story. He also doesn’t give us many details of the setting either, but a house or an apartment somewhere. Although, Carver mainly uses plot in his story; he successfully deliver the story by fully using all the elements …show more content…

The rising action is simply understood as the tense and complicated action or event leading up to the climax. The rising action in “Popular Mechanics” is when the woman takes away the baby’s picture from the man. The woman emotionally does the wrong thing which is taking the only thing of the baby the man could leave with. By doing that, she both raises the man’s temper and destroys his patient which make him loses his mind and isn’t thinking right. Therefore, he goes after the woman to get the actual baby rather than just a picture, and that is when the thing gets to the climax. The climax is the action or event where the conflict explodes; it’s the turning point between the rising action and the falling action. The climax of this story is when the man tries to take the baby from the woman. They then have a tug of war fight where the baby is the string. They pull back and forth which is intensely hurting the baby. Carver successfully uses the elements rising action and climax to develop the plot and the conflict between the characters. He logically applies the cause and effect rule to portray the events in the story where one thing leads to another. He emphasizes that because the woman takes one thing from the man, the man wants to take one thing from her which is the baby. Carver doesn’t use the element falling action in this story when he just ends it right after the …show more content…

Carver tells the story mainly through what happens in the story, rather than through the narrator’s perspective or the characters’ emotion and personalities. He connects all the events in the story in a logical way by using the elements rising action and climax. Therefore, he drew the reader 's’ attention and raise their curiosity toward what would happen next in the story. At the end, Carver finishes the story with an open ending which is a great way to end the story when the characters are not fully described in both emotion and personality. Therefore, the readers couldn’t predict what the characters would do to solve the conflict. By ending the story with an open ending, Carver allows the readers to create their own ending and satisfy with their own

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