Affirmative Action And Higher Education By Nancy Cantor

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In her article, “Affirmative Action and Higher Education”, Nancy Cantor presents an argument in support of affirmative action in college admissions. Cantor primarily uses anecdotal evidence in combination with pathos in order to make her argument that affirmative action is to be implemented in schools. Very few facts are presented in the article, with majority of the driving force of the writing being moral guilt trips and claims that diversity is important without providing anecdotal evidence to suggest that her claim is true. Cantor does cite a few court cases in the article and even states her own experience with the University of Michigan, where she is employed, and affirmative action as well. In the article, Cantor urges readers of the …show more content…

Even though I personally support affirmative action’s sentiments, this article was written somewhat poorly. The author makes many claims and questions in the reader’s morality without providing proper evidence to make said claims. The article comes off as “affirmative action is so great and not having it is morally wrong. Therefore, if you, the reader, disagree, that means that you’re also morally wrong.” The author writes from a place of credibility, however. Being the chancellor of a university, she would be able to see affirmative action in effect up close and personal with each year’s admissions and the aftermath of those admissions. She would also have the authority to comment on the University of Michigan court case that was happening at the time, in support of affirmative action. While I would support affirmative action, I feel that this article has way more fluff than substance and would be more persuasive if more evidence was provided to back up …show more content…

Bush makes a far more compelling argument due to actually providing some form of evidence and explanation compared to Nancy Cantor, who relied primarily on an appeal to emotion and what is morally “correct”. With the explanation of the University of Michigan’s quota system, it is easily laid out in a way that’s understandable as to why President Bush would take on this position on affirmative action. For example, some minorities get “bonus points” just for being a minority while a perfect SAT score would earn them less points, which can be construed as unfair. How Bush suggests a solution is also well done. He presents information that multiple state’s universities have used different means to sift through their admissions in order to achieve diversity and then claims that there are different ways to satisfy the need for diversity without banking on race to sometimes be the determining factor. In comparison, Nancy Cantor’s argument is weak. The tone of the article comes off more as emotional and moral-attacking rather than actually argumentative. There’s many claims based on nonexistent points of data to draw the inference from. It can be beneficial to use anecdotal information, but if that is what the opinion piece is solely based on, the article loses substance due to not having at least a solid foundation of some truth. The author name drops court cases and comes from a place of authority, but makes no further use of the argument with information.

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