An Extract from Divergent: Tris

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Divergent – Tris
I live in a society where you are asked to choose one behavior. Where I live there are 5 different factions that you have to choose from. There is the dauntless, amity, erudite, candor, and abnegation. I was raised an abnegation. My parents and older brother Caleb were meant to be abnegation, but not so much for me. Our life was so boring. We did not have entertainment or anything in that nature. We were expected to be selfless. I couldn’t handle it. It just wasn’t me. Thank goodness we didn’t have to stay in the faction we were born into. Our only way out was at the choosing ceremony. We would take an aptitude test to give us a recommendation on which faction would best suit us but ultimately, the choice was ours in the end.
The day before the choosing ceremony, we went to take an aptitude test. This test wasn’t any normal test. In this test, we entered a virtual world that put us in situations where we had to make quick choices that determined our outcome on the test. But the only catch to it was, you had no idea what type of test it would be beforehand. I will never forget the feeling that hit me when they called my name at the ceremony. When I heard, “From Abnegation: Susan Black and Beatrice Prior” my chest felt like it was going to explode. I couldn’t breathe. I walked into the testing room and sat in a chair. The lady administering my test was a girl named Tori, whom was Dauntless. She had a tattoo on her back of a hawk with a red eye. I asked her about it and she told me it resembled her conquered fear of the dark. She was surprised by my question and stated that she had never met a curious abnegation before. She attached electrodes to my head and told me to drink this unknown beverage, so I did. I felt ...

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...ned my allegiances.
Being initiated into Dauntless was tough and wearing to say the least. Immediately after the Choosing Ceremony we had to jump onto a moving train and off that train onto a rooftop. And it didn’t get any easier. From that rooftop we had to jump off into a square cut out at the bottom to get back to headquarters. Some initiates didn’t make it on the way. The training required us to fight one another each day until we were physically unable to fight. Gender didn’t matter in these fights. We also had to learn other challenging skills such as throwing knifes at targets and such. Like I said before, hard was an understatement.
All in all I am glad I made the choice I did. Abnegation was not the faction for me and I didn’t think Dauntless was either when I first was initiated. But I soon learned to love the difficulty of it and the thrill of everything.

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