Remembrance By Isabelle De Bokay Analysis

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This critique is for Anne-Isabelle de Bokay’s short story titled “Remembrance,” which showcases the crippling effects of guilt and resentment, of what can happen when the weight of loss lingers. “Remembrance” opens with a husband, Samuel, shortly after he finished burying an item of his deceased daughter. His wife, Mariette, calls him inside for their daily routine: she seats him, feeds him, and puts him to bed. The events that led up to Linne’s (their daughter) death are revealed: Samuel’s command to climb the tree caused her to fall and later die, and Mariette’s shock prevented her from calling for help. The usual state of things breaks as Samuel speaks his mind, blaming Mariette and convincing her that she killed their daughter. In the …show more content…

He does not speak for most of the story, indicating an obvious trauma resulting from his daughter’s death. There are early indications of his resentment toward his wife, particularly in the beginning paragraph when he sighs, probably annoyed, when being summoned back to the house. The author puts more focus on Mariette’s thoughts after she puts her husband to bed. She suffers from a recurring nightmare about Linne’s death that keeps her from sleeping. Linne’s death scene introduces three characters, her brothers, who are not mentioned again in the present, a loose end in the plot. Their relevance to the story is merely a contrast to Linne; while they are active and praised by Samuel, Linne is weaker and deprived from her father’s attention. This contrast reveals Mariette’s resentment toward her husband, whose expectations Linne was trying to meet when she fell to her eventual death. However, she does not explicitly discuss her feelings about her husband or his lack of speaking, as she did in the previous version. This could be a hindrance to the story, since it leaves the reader wondering about the full picture of their lives before

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