Continuation of A Farewell to Arms

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This recreative writing piece has been inserted at the end of ‘A Farewell to Arms’ where the last line reads, “After a while I went out and left the hospital and walked back to the hotel in the rain”. I have chosen to continue writing after the end of the novel to show the impact that Catherines death has had on Frederic Henry. Despite Frederic appearing to be in control, it is clear that her death has affected him, leaving him extremely detached and isolated. I have kept my piece in a retrospective narrative like Hemingway. Though the use of past tense, a confessional narrative is established as Frederic is reliving the events through prose in an attempt to forget his past, suggested by the title. The use of a retrospective narrative also presents the idea that the narrative voice is following a pre planned story that the Frederic at the time is not in control of, creating a sense of inevitability and foreboding throughout the whole novel.

The writing is typical to Hemingway’s style and depicts Frederic as being lonely and isolated after Catherine, who is described as being “his other half” has died leaving him alone. I have shown this by using the motif of the rain, which is featured throughout the novel. This is an important motif as it is used in A Farewell To Arms to foreshadow Catherine’s impending future as she explains “sometimes I see me dead in it” .The effect of this is that whenever the rain is mentioned, the reader will be wary as Hemingway creates a clear link between death and rain even in the first Chapter of the book , “At The Start of the Winter came the permanent rain and with the rain came chlolera….in the end only seven thousdand died of it in the army”. I have continued to include the rain to show that the ...

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...y not giving a specific person there is a link to the themes of chance and luck as it could be anyone. This also depicts Frederic as being isolated as the horrors of war have left him in despair with absolutely no sense of hope, showing signs of a nihlistic character.

In conclusion, my recreative is similar to Hemingway’s style as depicting Frederic as an isolated narrator. I have tried to immitate his stylic features by using a mixture of short and long sentences with simple understated language to create the idea that Frederic is lonely and isolated. In addition by using direct address and the motif of the rain, the overall atmosphere created is that Frederic is missing Catherine dearly, and he is only deteriorating and becoming more detached in the end, through the destructive nature of war and the elusive nature of the world, the world will break Frederic too.

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