Persuasive Speech: The Birth Order Effect

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The speech “Birth Order Effect” discusses the effects of being born as a first, middle, or last child. After intense reviewing and critiquing on the online speech subject, purpose, thesis, research, organization, delivery, and presentation aids. I’ve have determined this speech to be well presented only having small errors that could have been easily avoided. The “Birth Order Effect” speech subject was worth the time and effort spent to watch it, because it explain each characteristic and descriptions every child usually has. The topic was narrow and enough to be covered in some depth. Everyone is either an only child, first child, middle child or baby of the family making it very relevant to the audiences today. Throughout the whole speech the thesis is clear and limited to one main idea which is birth order effects. Many good key points are given in the speech that clearly related and supported the thesis. For example the speaker describes his own family using the birth order effect. Giving us a list of characteristics that describe his sisters, brother, and himself being a first, middle, or last child. The speech was adequately researched, because he mentions Dr Kevin Leman an author who …show more content…

He would maintain eye contact with the audience at times but mainly look at his PowerPoint or note cards for most of the time. The speaker would fidget, and constantly look down at his notes making him look not confident. His confidence level seem to be average at times, but slight above average when speaking on certain key points. The speaker does show enthusiasm on his topic about the effects of birth order. It looks like he can relate to the topic and does know a lot of information on it. The volume of the speech was just right and the speed is at a good pace making him easy to understand. The PowerPoint he had was an effective presentation aid he used. He kept referring information from it, and gave the audience visual

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