Marita's Bargain Short Story

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What if there were one change that could increase the chances of students going into a higher education and achieve success. Showing students that they can stimulate could help increase their need to succeed. In the short story “Marita’s Bargain” written by Malcolm Gladwell Marita is viewed as a young girl who attends KIPP wants to succeed by giving up on her personal life to be focused only on school. In KIPP the students are exposed to their peers and even previous students academic achievement by having their pennants or Certificates of the university they attended all over the school “On the walls were dozens of certificates from the New York state regents exam, testifying for first-class honors for Corcoran’s students”(11). Surrounding …show more content…

Obviously, if you want to become something you must give up something “Everyone says that KIPP is hard, but then once you get the hang of it it's not really that hard”(13). This showed how she was used to the long school hours every day because she says once you get the hang of it it isn’t hard. She shows grit towards her education because she doesn't want to be let down or have any comments affect how she does in school. Time and effort separate people from seeing their own success in the near future. This change is important to Anaheim because it will give many young students a leap into what they should be getting towards later on in their professional careers. Students from Anaheim will gain a better mentality from all of this and have something different in mind like the need to see themselves on the walls of Anaheim as well and is seen as an example to many others. If everyone were to have just a change in mindset in a positive and outgoing classroom would be easier to teach and test grades will surely rise as …show more content…

There are many flaws within it that could slowly but surely go downhill with time. Students should be provided with more extracurricular activities that will benefit themselves later on in the future. In the documentary “Mad Hot Ballroom” by Marilyn Agrelo students were given an opportunity to join dance in their community to help them get out of the reality that they face at home. By giving these students a chance at something they had never done and seemed foreign to them they gained many life skills. They were shown on how to be competitive, work with strangers, become responsible, and much more “Let's use this trick eye-to-eye connection I am serious take a look at each other like if it were the last time in your life”. These students have learned to follow directions and keep track someone which could help them when they are in the classroom with a teacher. It may seem like a minor detail but it will help them stay focused on someone when they would really need it. By listening to the dance teacher's directions they become people that will easily comply with a set of instructions that are handed to them and have no trouble doing them as well. These students also face reality one step at a time also earlier than most of their peers will “some people don’t have the opportunity,and it's not their fault it's their parents problem”. Their eyes are opened to what it means to lose or not be able to

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