Julie's Poem 'Able To Find Light In The Darkness'

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This poem is about how Julie was able to find light in the darkness. Overall, this poem is a metaphor itself. It compares a symphony to the Nazis, for that everything is well arranged and orchestrated where the conductor is the Nazi character von Linden and the musicians are his associates. However, within this poem there two similes and one metaphor I used. The first simile is in the very first line of the third stanza. I chose to put this simile in this location because I thought it was most logical to explain what comes next after she hears footsteps coming towards her cell. In addition, I wanted this effect to happen at this point because if you were to analyze the first three stanzas, you can see that the intensity of that the darkness …show more content…

The second simile is in the second line of the fifth stanza. The purpose of its location is to emphasize the turning point of Julie’s mentality after being in the darkness for so long. The effect I hoped to achieve with this simile is that it reveals how wise Julie was when she was able to sense that there is still hope and that there is an important person in her life that she longs to reunite with, Maddie. I chose to use a simile instead of a metaphor because I did not want to make Julie’s heart sound like it is an inanimate object, I wanted it to be real. The metaphor is in the second line of the seventh stanza because I wanted it to be near the end where Julie realizes who she really is and come to appreciate and utilizes her qualities. I hoped that this metaphor would reveal, firstly, that Julie is a great liar, and secondly, that she is persistent. I chose to use a metaphor instead of a simile because in a sense, it gives a feeling that Julie has control of her own self when I say her heart is a person, instead of like a …show more content…

I chose to use personification at the beginning of each stanza in order to introduce the actions of Julie’s heart under the influence of darkness and light. Moving on, the first key poetic devices I used for sound effects was repetition. And of course, the repetition is in the beginning of each stanza until the sixth stanza. I hoped that repeating simply “My Heart” without any words before it, would give a weak feel and show unconfidence in Julie. But the repetition of the beginning of each stanza ends at the sixth stanza because when Julie realizes that she has a friendship waiting for her, she becomes more confident of her actions. The last stanzas begin with more words to emphasize her confidence. Another sound effect poetic device is alliteration, located in the last line of the third stanza. My reasoning behind the location and effect is that it gives a smooth flow when reading and that it accompanies the simile quite well. The last sound effect device I used is rhyme in the last stanza. I wanted the ending to sound playful and cheerful, since that is when Julie’s mentality stabilizes and she internally agrees lie about codes and

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