A Poetry Comparison

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A Poetry Comparison

The poem 'Mother, any distance', by Simon Armitage is from a

collection of poems titled 'Book of Matches'; it is meant to be read

in the time it takes a match to burn, and thus cannot be very long.

The poem is written in the first person, though it is not specific as

to whether it is from the perspective of a man or woman, which indeed

could be a result of deliberate ambiguity, or alternatively, it could

be Simon Armitage himself. The speaker, apparently in a house he or

she is about to move into, is measuring 'windows, pelmets, doors' with

their mother, who has 'come to help' as they need 'a second pair of

hands'. The technique of enjambment is used throughout the poem, and

rhyming couplets appear in the third and fourth lines of the first

stanza; 'doors' and 'floors'.

A sense of adventure is evoked in the last line of the first stanza,

with descriptions of seemingly normal and unremarkable things such as

'walls' and 'floors' including adjectives such as 'acres' and

'prairies'; this is also where the poem departs from direct reality.

These images of vast space indicate the speaker's excitement of

leaving home, and it is here that the theme of change is first

addressed within the poem. While the speaker's mother stands in the

same place holding one end of the measuring tape 'recording length',

i.e. taking responsibility, the speaker explores the house, 'reporting

metres'. Here the speaker is made to still seem very young and not

used to becoming completely independent, and is not completely sure of

themselves; 'back to base', showing that they still return to their

mother to make sure what they have done is r...

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...- 'Young...their bed'. By the time her work

is done, 'stars are…peep', showing how long she toils. The fire she

lights begins as a 'seed' in the morning, consequently growing, and at

the end of the day, 'the seed…and cold'. This could be a metaphor for

the loss of energy associated with old age.

All four poems address different forms of loss and change, and explore

them in different ways, and thus contrast to one another in different

ways. In particular 'On my first Sonne' addresses the emotions related

to loss, whereas 'Before You Were Mine' explores the physical aspect

of change by switching through tenses. Some contain similarities, such

as 'Mother, any distance…' and 'The Song of the Old Mother' in the way

they address age, but all use different techniques in the way they

explore the themes mentioned above.

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