Evaluating “The America I Believe In”

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I found “The America I believe in by Colin Powell” to be an interesting and compelling excerpt. I personally like this excerpt because he tries to address the unfriendliness being shown towards immigrants by denying them a lot of common rights; above all I found myself lingering on Colin Powells’ side just for the fact that I’m an immigrant in the United States. I believe the basis of Powells’ excerpt stands on Americans foundational moral values. He intend to cause Americans to reflect and change their negative attitude towards immigrants and rather encourage them to live in the nation. Although Colin Powel provides an effectual argument through a formal and practical style to convince Americans who already support his idea, he fails to persuade Anti-immigrants idealist who are not on his side. This is because he fails to provide a realistic measure to solve the threat posed by illegal immigrants, he is being bias and he provides weak support for his argument that immigration should be encouraged. Colin Powel’s presents his arguments in a very practical and formal style which makes his argument very effectual; the general audience can relate to it because he communicate in a simple language and tell a lot of personal stories. As a result, it enlightens Americans of their own common history; the reason for their ancestors to first journey to the land of America was to seek freedom from the harsh treatment received in Britain. Secondly, the founding fathers of America who were mostly Christian believed that every person must be treated equally and fairly despite their religious background and values. The style of Colin Powel is very strong in the sense that it hammers on these same freedom principles Americans must in turn recipr... ... middle of paper ... ...f money the Brazilian kids were short of; again this become another weak point for his argument not to convince the anti-immigrant idealist. In conclusion, although Colin Powels’ plea for immigrant is based on Americans common moral and historical values; and although it provides an effectual argument through a formal and practical style to convince Americans who already support his idea, he fails to persuade Anti-immigrants idealist who are not on his side. This is because he fails to provide a realistic measure to solve the threat posed by illegal immigrants, he is being bias and he provides weak support for his argument that immigration should be encouraged. Work cited Powel Colin. “The America I Believe in”. This I Believe: The Personal Philosophies of Remarkable Men and Women. Ed. Jay Allison and Dan Gediman. New York: Henry Holt, 2007. 184-87. Print.

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