Thesis Statement About Joaquin Guzman

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Topic: Joaquin Guzman
Organization: Topical/chronological
Specific Purpose: I want to give a general overview of Joaquin Guzman’s criminal career, including his multiple escapes from federal prison.

I. Introduction
a. Attention Getter: Have any of you ever smoked weed? Done cocaine? If you answered yes, there is an almost 50% chance that it was smuggled across the border by the Sinaloa Cartel, which is controlled by one Joaquin “El Chapo” Guzman.
b. Relevance: Guzman is the leader of one of the largest criminal organizations in the world, thus making him one of the most powerful men in the world.
c. Credibility Statement: The Mexican drug trade is always in the headlines here in Texas due to our proximity to the Mexican border.
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Estimated annual revenue from U.S. drug trade is more than $3 billion, just short of Fortune 500 iii. Bribes at every level of the chain of command in government/military and law enforcement
1. Estimated $1 billion a year in bribes

Transition: Now that we know a little bit about the organization, let’s discuss the man who leads it, Joaquin Guzman.

b. Over the last 3 decades, he has become one of the most powerful men in the world
i. Known as “El Chapo” because his is short (only about 5’6”) ii. Joaquin Guzman was a lieutenant of the cartel when it first came to power, and took full control in the 1990s after the arrest of the preceding leader iii. Since taking over, he has smuggled more drugs and made more money than even Pablo Escobar (Forbes, 2012)
1. Made Forbes’ most powerful people in the world 2009-2011
2. 2nd richest man in Mexico behind Carlos Slim iv. The first underground tunnels used to smuggle drugs across the Mexican border into the US were built under his command
v. In 2012, the US Treasury Department named him the most powerful drug trafficking criminal in the world

Translation: Now that you have a better idea of just how powerful Guzman and his criminal enterprise are, it will be easier to believe how he escaped from maximum security prison

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