How Does Wilkie Collins Create Tension In The Ostler

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The Ostler by Wilkie Collins

"The Ostler" a pre-20th century story by Wilkie Collins written in 1855. This short story is about the life of a man called Isaac Scatchard, who is a very unfortunate man. He goes for a job and being the unlucky man he is, gets there a day late. He stays at a frightening inn where he has a dream/premonition about a woman who tries to kill him. Later in the story he meets and marries this woman.

The Opening four paragraphs are one episode in the story where suspense I built. The narrator, Wilkie Collins, writes these first four paragraphs in first person. In the first paragraph he describes a strange old man sleeping in a stable in the middle of the day, "I find an …show more content…

The author begins this paragraph by lulling the reader into a false sense of security, "It was a bright sunny morning and the little cottage parlour was full of light as Mrs Scatchard, happy and expectant; dressed for the occasion in her Sunday gown." Here the author is acting as if everything is ordinary and it is a perfectly normal day. It's almost too normal, like a fairy tale.

He starts to rebuild the suspense when he begins to break up the sentences with dashes, "His mother rose to receive her-advanced a few steps, smiling-looked Rebecca full in the eyes-and stopped." Where he says, "…and stopped." It builds up more tension. It makes you curious as to why she's stopped. The way the author describes Isaacs mothers expression after she has first met Rebecca reveals that Isaacs mother has obviously realized something that has petrified her, "Her face, which had been flushed a moment before, turned white in an instant-…a blank look of terror-her outstretched arms fell to her sides…she staggered back…a low cry to her …show more content…

The third paragraph describes how the house looks and how things have changed that may suggest she is lurking around. "He had left the candle burning the bedchamber…now, there was no light in it…the house door…he remembered to have closed it…he found it open…"

This frightens the reader into thinking that Rebecca could have turned out the light so that she can lurk in the dark waiting for him or she could have left the house in search of him.

In the final paragraph Wilkie Collins begins to use the dashes again to break up the sentences. "…looked in the kitchen…found nothing; went up at last to the bedroom-it was empty…a picklock lay on the floor."

Where Wilkie Collins writes that Isaac goes up to the dreaded bedroom where everything was based, when he finds an empty room, the reader then realizes that Rebecca has left and could be anywhere. She could re-enter the house anytime, even if the doors and windows were locked, she could pick them, hence, "…a picklock lay on the floor…"

This story has a different impact on readers now than when it was first published because readers in 1855 were easier to scare

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