She's Come Undone: The Making Of Dolores Price

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The Making of Dolores Price
There is a lot of speculation as to who can write what. Of course people can write just about anything, but storytelling is all about experience. To be able to transfer words to a piece of paper, you first need to know the words and how they fit together. It can be challenging if you're writing about a topic you don’t know about nor have the experience of what you're writing about. Just guessing doesn’t get you anywhere. Someone writing a story in a different person's perspective is controversial and challenged in society. Without someone first hand experiencing a situation or asking someone who has, it raises some red flags. An example would be a straight person writing a story with a queer character, or a man writing …show more content…

At the beginning of the novel she is just a young girl living with her mother and grandmother. Ever since the beginning, what has concerned me is how often the author describes Dolores by describing her body. Even before we knew what she was like as a person we knew she was overweight, and she was just a teenager. Describing women by their bodies is popular amongst men. When asked about a woman, men typically first describe their body types. Because that's the first thing they notice about a woman. And men then judge a woman by her body type what kind of person she is. Wally Lamb seems to be famous for constantly mentioning women's bodies like they're the only thing that matters about a woman. In Wally Lamb’s introduction to the novel he talks about being a student teacher and says “, I decided I would save Sheila’s life by engaging her in class discussion. But each time I called on her, she shook her head and remained silent. Her fat fortress that no rookie teacher was going to penetrate.” He said Dolores was inspired by Sheila. But it's gross that he just described a high school girl simply as fat. And that she’s quiet because she’s fat. And the reality is is that he doesn’t know her. He just made assumptions about a girl based on her body type. But the only thing combating against this notion is that one of the focal points of the novel has to do with Dolores’s weight and how she’s ‘coming

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