Rhetorical Controversy Over Gender Identity

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I am writing this letter in reference to the revisions I made in my rhetorical analysis essay over gender identity. The revisions fall into three major categories: content expansion over the essay’s exigency and ethos, mechanics throughout the essay, and content correction in the discussion over pathos and other areas.

The discussion of the exigency in my essay is subtle, therefore I added the author’s urgency towards the discussion of how American society should no longer segregate genders. By showing the author’s exigency, I was capable of making the thesis statement more precise and related to the author’s argument. This allowed me to expand my explanation of the author’s purpose for writing her article and her credibility.

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