Persuasive Shrimp Essay

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Attention Getter (can include reveal topic): “Shrimp is the fruit of the Sea. You can barbecue it, boil it, broil it, bake it, sauté it.” This was a quote from the movie Forest Gump. Shrimp is the most popular seafood that people eat due to the soft and chewy texture that taste like chicken, but better. As a result, increased demands on shrimps have become quite problematic, Proposition (overall argument): and I believe that we should practice a sustainable way of eating shrimps. Relevance: Even if you don’t like shrimp or seafood in general, we should still practice the ways of being sustainable since the ocean is a valuable resource for all of us. In fact, ocean controls temperature, gives us oxygen, and provide a faster transportation system by boats. …show more content…

According to WWF (World Wildlife Fund), “farmed shrimp accounts for 55 percent of the shrimp produced globally.” They’re mostly farmed in developing countries such as Thailand, Vietnam, Brazil, etc. Problem I. Shrimp farming harms our environment. a. Although farming of shrimps has made shrimp more accessible to shrimp loving publics such as U.S, Europe, and Japan, shrimp farming method has caused some major damages to the environment. b. Pollution 1. As shrimp farming increases, excessive amounts of organic waste, chemicals and antibiotics are produced. These pollutions can affect groundwater or coastal estuaries. 2. Due to pollutions, 5 to 10 percent of mangrove habitats are lost globally as well. (WWF) c. Disease 1. Other than pollutions, diseases are also problematic since monocultures are very susceptible to diseases. Outbreaks of disease in shrimp can cause the whole shrimp population in one area to become ill resulting in shutting down of the farm. Not only that, ill shrimps will rise up to the surface and be eaten by the seagulls, spreading the pathogen to other nearby shrimp farms as well. II. Human trafficking and corruption in the industry still

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