Persuasive Essay On Wellness Center

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In America today, many children are very unhealthy, and in Coalgate, Oklahoma the youth are required to be more fit than most. The Choctaw wellness center is the only public space with exercise equipment in Coalgate. However, the youth of Coalgate aren't allowed to use this equipment. The Choctaw wellness center should be open to kids 13 and 14 years old, not just 15 and older. First of all, Coalgate school's sports program would improve if there was a public space where Coalgate's youth could come to get stronger, or to get in shape to try out for new sports. Also, physically challenging activities have been proven to help people with ADD to cope with their disorder. This could help with kids who have trouble focusing to learn the plays in team sports. Notably, …show more content…

Summer jobs like these are very common for teens in this community. Most kids that take these jobs develop their work ethic that way, but others don't make it very long in this field because they aren't physically able to do it. If the wellness center was to be open to them, they could make more money and develop a better work ethic. Last but not least, having the young people in a supervised environment like the Choctaw wellness center could keep the kids from roaming the town and getting into trouble. An adult in the wellness center would supervise whenever the center is open. If the wellness center were open to young teens, they would be less likely to be pressured into drug or alcohol abuse. Some people would say that having irresponsible teenagers in the center could lead to damage of equipment. However, the wellness center has surveillance cameras set up all over the building. If someone was caught vandalizing equipment, they could be fined for the price of the equipment they damaged and be prohibited from coming

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