Discovering Independence: A Personal Journey

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Just last year, when i was in 9th grade, I had times where it was hard to be strong due to mental issues. It was really hard to be independent when I just wanted someone to be there. Although many times I was not the strongest and did some really dumb things like getting bad grades and getting into trouble. I finally got over it, most of the time it was on my own too. I realized that if i wanted my life to change then I had to do something about it, and not let others bring me down or tell me what i can and can’t do. Over the summer I became very independent and I am so much happier now than I was before. My story shows how people can be very independent. Which relates to Mac and the sniper showing independence through the things they feel …show more content…

He doesn’t go only through physical pain or only emotional pain but both. For example the text says, “When the sniper reached the laneway on the street level, he felt a sudden curiosity as to the identity of the enemy sniper whom he had killed… The sniper darted across the street. A machine gun tore up the ground around him with a hail of bullets, but he escaped. He threw himself face downward beside the corpse. The machine gun stopped… Then the sniper turned over the dead body and looked into his brother’s face”. (O’Flaherty 5) This quote shows how even though the sniper already won the battle between him and an enemy sniper, he was curious enough to risk getting shot at my something else (the machine gun) and see who the person he shot and killed was. It turns out that the person he shot was someone relatively close to him. Due to this critical information he is now facing many physical and emotional pain independently. Even though Mackenzie is very independent with the way he solves his problems, the sniper is clearly more independent. He goes through so much more without the choice of wanting to give up, unlike

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