How To Write A Narrative Essay On Disney World

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ESCAPE At Disney World the amusement park is at its closing. With the moon glistening in the sky the line is at its end for It’s a Small World. Bren is 16 and has long black hair, hazel eyes, and a black mini skirt with a white mickey mouse shirt. Tulula her best friend is wearing a red shirt with white shorts and and has brown hair and green eyes. They are excited to aboard the ride they’ve rode on dozens of times before. “I’m so excited,” Tulula tells Bren. “Yes, I have been waiting for this all day long!” Bren says with enthusiasm. They both have been at Disney World since it opened early that morning. This is the first year they're by themselves since they both got their driver’s license three months ago. “Attention, this is the last ride …show more content…

Startled, everyone jumps out of the boat and into the water. The water was cold and dense; about five feet deep. The dolls slowly saunter over to them and drop into the water one after the other. Everyone as it seems swims for the exit. The dark-haired boy got out first and helped them both out of the water. Once Bren was out they looked around and noticed that the other people on the boat were gone and just vanished. Also were the other workers and people in the park.“What do we do now?” Talula asks Bren in a hushed voice as she twists her wet brown hair. Bren whispers back, ”Stop, you always twist your hair when you're nervous. Everything’s going to be okay, we just need a plan.” “I’m David,” the gruff-voiced brown haired boy in soggy blue jeans and a skin tight soaking wet white shirt says. They barely have enough time to say their names before the mechanical dolls are getting closer to them. The three of them all run out of the ride as fast as they can. Bren takes the lead, her black hair whipping the air as she runs out to one of the map holders nearby and takes one out. “Look,” Bren says while out of breath. “The exit is this way through the castle bridge and then straight through to the place where we board the …show more content…

They run back through the castle as Talula and David examine the map and notice a secret exit on the other side of the park that magically appears and starts to show directions. “We should move right past the merrie-go-round and cut through some of the rides.” David says. They run past the almost human dolls and turn right past the merrie-go-round. All three of them run through the streets and sidewalks. All of the rides seemed to be turned on and running. The creatures behind are gaining on them as David gets an idea as he sees the go carts that are parked off to the sides. “Get in one” he says panicked. Bren gets in a blue one, David a red and Tulula a white one. Following the map that David has they drive through different attraction’s until they go up a hill into Space Mountain. Getting out, they see that the dolls have become real humans and are driving behind them. “This way,” says Talula, as she takes hold of the map. Running,all three of them make it to the front of the operated machine as the next ride starts. Snapping their seatbelts the ride takes off just as all the doll people come forming in the lines to follow them. Their view is of a space enhanced rollercoaster which runs really fast. Then the coaster magically bursts through the building and drives it to the ferris wheel. They get out and Bren and Talula looked at the map and saw that an arrow

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