Gun-Personal Narrative

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It was a cloudy, late night as I stood against the concrete wall of the alleyway behind our old high school clutching a knife. Daton, my old high-school bully and now enemy, pointed a gun at me. It was a mystery as to how he managed to get the gun, but all I thought of was the bloodlust and excitement in his eyes as he pulled the trigger. The whole world slowed down as I stumbled to the ground. Daton laughed like a maniac and strutted away, twirling the gun like a gangster. I despised, envied him. Why me? Not him? I felt anger bubble up inside me. My body gradually got heavier as my eyes closed. Suddenly, everything felt light—I felt as if I could soar far away from all my problems and forget about them. Betty flashed in my mind and I wanted …show more content…

Am I dead? No, not yet! I felt gravity trying to pull me, my spirit, down, underneath the ground, trying to yank me away. No, please wait. Not yet, I begged silently and the force stopped—for now. “Ten minutes,” I heard in my head. I knew what I had to do. I rose high above the alleyway, enough to see the whole of New York City. I travelled past the buzzing downtown to a particular complex: my home. Betty was asleep on the sofa waiting for me. I bent over, kissed her forehead, and whispered goodbye. I felt my heart swell as I gazed at her. Today was Valentine’s Day. Earlier, I had bought her white lilies. I picked one up and tucked it into my sleeve. I felt guilt blossom in me. She didn’t deserve this. She begged me to stop the fighting, but I didn’t listen. “I’m sorry, Betty; I should’ve listened.” Gravity returned, but it pulled me upwards. “I’m sorry for everything I’ve done. Take care of Betty for me.” Tears poured out of my eyes, as I smiled with regret. White light blinded me as my spirit frayed and faded away. I heard a faint whisper, “You’re forgiven.” The next morning, police found my twisted and bullet-filled body on the ground. They said that it had a bittersweet smile and a lily in my

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