Excerpt Alternate Ending

Marcel was on his way to the banquet when he saw something that caught his eye. He was trained to look for these things, and as he walked over he saw it was a horse. The horse was small,brown, and shaggy. It looked like it was very hungry. “Are you okay girl” Marcel said. The horse obviously said nothing, but she turned to look at him and as she did, he saw a big cut on its back. “Don’t worry,” He said, “I’ll fix that.” The wound very large and hard to clean, but after a long few hours Marcel had cleaned and stitched the wound. When Marcel reached the banquet he found a stable and put the horse, who was now called atom because of how small it was and its strength. His next mission was to find Battlemaster Will. Marcel was a guardian of the kingdom and

“How are we supposed to follow the trail without you here?” Marcel knew he was going to ask this and responded without much though
“You and everyone else will stay here while I go ahead. We will lose a day or so but when I come back we will be able travel a lot faster.” George would’ve liked it more if they could travel tomorrow and gain more ground on Horace but he agreed.
“Fine.”

Marcel reached Horace’s camp late that night. He rode all day to find Horace and when he got there he saw that there was a group of 50 knights and men-at-arms. There was one big bonfire and the high trees above concealed the smoke. Marcel noticed a big big tent in the middle of everything and he figured that was Horace’s tent. He walked slowly over to a group of men sitting at the edge of the camp and listened. “Tomorrow at dawn we are going to make the final push towards Grimsby.” said the first man. “Why are we here?” he asked, “We both know that Horace is going to take all the money from the raid.” Marcel got back at around noon the next day and told George what he