Emm A Fictional Narrative

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Pulling up to the park, Joe jumps out of the car and starts looking around. "Rachel?" He yells, quickly surveying the deserted playground. He started walking down the hill when Jerry called out to him. "Hey boss, I found her cell by the bird feeder. There's a cup of seed spilled by it too. Oh, my god, there's blood on the phone cover." "Get a search party out here now!" He orders. "Didn't patrol just say they saw a black van leave the park? The same van used in Emma's attempted kidnapping." "Oh my god, the killer's abducted, Rachel." ***** Rachel's lying quietly in the van still trying to figure out what to do when the killer swerves onto a rugged dirt road. "They won't be able to find me now,"' he laughs, hanging a sharp right. Various items …show more content…

After a few minutes, she slowly opens her eyes. Seeing the coast was clear, she tries moving again. "I should be able to grab it now," she thinks, trying to reach across the other tools. Seeing that she's still too far away, she scoots a little closer. "Damn cops are still on my ass!" He yells, slamming his free hand against the steering wheel. Hearing his voice she freezes. A few minutes later she tries reaching for the object again. "I'm almost there," she thinks, stretching her arm out as far as it would go. "This should take care of them," he laughs, makes a hard left. Rachel helplessly watches as the gun whizzes past her. ***** Detectives, I wanted to inform you the blood you found on the phone case isn't the detectives, it's our perp, and it's dried, so I'd say it's been there for some time." "I bet it was from this morning, boss." "Maybe, but it still doesn't prove she's safe." "Sir, the dogs picked up her scent at the bird seed and followed it to the parking lot, but lost it there." "He does have her. The son of a bitch did kidnap Rachel!" Joe yells. "We don't know that for sure, …show more content…

"You forgot to ask about Rachel." Bonnie says. He hung up before I had the chance. I'm sure he would've told us if something was wrong, honey." "Yeah, you're probably right. ***** The driver makes a quick right, then a left. She tries to grab the gun as it continues to slide back and forth beside her. Suddenly the van went completely dark. "Where are we?" Rachel tries to look out of the windows, but it was too dark to see anything. Slamming on his breaks, the driver quickly turns off the engine. "Now's my chance." She thinks, anxiously fumbling around for the gun. "Hey, what's going on back there?" Jumping up from his seat, the drive stomps towards the back of the van. Rachel swings the thin metal piece around smacking the side of his leg. He tumbles over top of her. Pushing him away, she springs to her feet. “No one hurts my sister and gets away with it! She yells, lifting the metal bar over her head. He grabs a hold of the metal piece as it’s coming towards him. Lifting up his legs he pushes her as hard as he can. She stumbles backwards over the tools. “Now to take care of you once and for all.” He says, springing to his

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