Creative Writing: Things Fall Apart

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The following day, at the picnic on the field close to the river, Audra sat beside her friends on the blankets they had spread out. Together, they sipped mead and told jokes on the springtime afternoon—one that felt more like summer with its healing warmth—and Audra’s spirits lifted.
Audra and Ina created a shady spot by draping a blanket over sticks stuck into the ground to shield Faye and Una’s new babies from the sun, and the little ones slept. Elen and Dera snacked on berries, then started mashing them to make “jam” for the bread.
“Oh, dear.” Faye frowned. “That’ll be quite the mess.”
“If it is one thing I have learned, it is to let go of the small things and irritations,” said Ina. “Enjoy your time with your little ones. That was something …show more content…

“Mam, I want to pick flowers for you and Gran.”
He pointed toward the hedges that stood at the woods’ edge. They were not so far away, and still a good distance from the river bank. She glanced over her shoulder back at the castle where the guard appeared to keep watch over them.
“All right, go ahead, Rory. That’s sweet of you.”
He ambled toward the wildflowers sprouting from the ground next to the bushes as Audra looked on. However, an instant later, a swarm of wasps descended upon the blanket where Audra and Ina sat. They both shrieked and tried to swat them away, but the flailing only angered the insects and they started stinging. The guard rushed down from his post and ran across the field, then helped Ina and Audra away from the swarm.
Breathless and her neck burning from several stings, Audra looked back at bushes where Rory had stood. He was gone.
Audra did not think; she ran. “Rory! Rory!”
The guard and Ina rushed after her.
“Rory! Where are you?” screamed Audra, hysterical, her heart leaping into her throat as she broke into a cold sweat of terror. He could have made it to the river, and the rains had created a few rapids, enough to sweep away a boy of …show more content…

The relief was replaced by anger that he had not listened. He might have died! Audra grabbed him by the shoulders. “Why did you run off? Haven’t your father and I told you how dangerous that is?”
“Yes, but—”
“But nothing!”
Aura spun him around and gave him a hard slap on his backside, then another. He did not even squeak. Clearly, Ina and the guard knew better than to challenge Audra’s authority as a mother, so they wandered back to the picnic blanket and remained quiet.
“May I turn?” Rory’s voice quavered, and the flowers lay at his feet; he must have dropped them during the spanking.
That little voice, full of fear and embarrassment, broke Audra’s heart. She might have listened to his explanation before she slapped his backside that hard. But she’d been so consumed with terror at the thought of losing him she had not been in her right mind. However, there was no simple way to explain that to a young child.
“Yes, you may turn.”
Slowly, he spun toward her, his wide green eyes red-rimmed, yet no tears fell. Like his father, he did his best to hide his discontent. “When I was at the bush, I called over and asked if I could go to the other side. I thought you said yes,

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