Compare And Contrast Essay On Annie Dillard

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John Audubon and Annie Dillard are similar in how observing the flight of the birds affects them, although Dillard feels a more personal connection while Audubon has a scientific response, but they differ in their utilization of diction and tone. Audubon describes the pigeons he saw in flight as a scientific observation whereas Dillard describes the starlings she observed in an artful manner. There are two kinds of people; ones who think of “what could be” (an idealist) and others who see things as “what it actually is” (a realist), in these two passages this idea is brought to life through Dillard and Audubon’s voices in their writing.

Audubon makes clear through his diction (which then influences his tone) that he is a man of science …show more content…

He begins his passage with numbers “autumn of 1813” then proceeds to note his location “passing over Barrens a few miles beyond Hardenburgh” he meticulously notes his observation of pigeons’ flight like a realist, in contrast, Dillard favours similes and artful imagery, she begins her paragraph with a beautiful description of her first glimpse of the starlings in the sky “Out of the dimming sky a speck appeared...gathered deep in the distance, flock sifting into flock and strayed towards me, transparent and whirling like smoke.” She recalls her breathtaking encounter with the starlings as an idealist romanticizing their flight. Audubon toys with numerical terms throughout his passage, “I observed the pigeons flying from northeast to southwest, in greater numbers..count the flocks that might pass...one hour.” He even continues on to actually mark a dot for every flock that passed him, and he “found that 163 had been …show more content…

“I cannot describe to you the extreme beauty of their aerial evolutions..”, Audubon logs, corresponding to Dillard’s emotions as she watched the starlings fly over her “I stood with difficulty, bashed by the unexpectedness of this beauty and my spread lungs roared.” Audubon and Dillard both see the flying birds as beautiful and are fascinated by their flight pattern and how agile they are. However the feeling of awe is more personal to Dillard than to Audubon because she writes “My eyes pricked from the effort...could tiny birds be sifting through me right now...fleet?” Dillard connects these birds to herself contrary to Audubon who connects his flocks of pigeons to angles and lines, “...they darted forward in undulating and angular lines, descended and swept close over the earth with inconceivable velocity, mounted perpendicularly so...column, and when high...continued

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