August 6 1945 Poem Language

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In the poem August 6, 1945, the poet Alison Fell used many different language techniques in abundance to reveal her purpose and ideas. Fell used language features such as similes, metaphors, assonances and sibilance to show her thoughts through three points-of-views: through the bombers around the time of impact, a victim of the nuclear bomb immediately after impact, and the bomber’s nightmares of the devastation he had caused. The first two stanzas tell a short perspective of the pilot, Colonel Paul Tibbets Jr., just before and just after dropping the bomb on Hiroshima. It tells what seems like the nuclear bomb what somewhat something good, happy, and exciting. Fell’s purpose for that section is to give the reader and the audience a false …show more content…

The idea that the audience picks up is the sickening horror that could only be shown through imagery or an actual image. The fourth stanza describes the effects of the bomb on the girl in gruesome detail and plenty of language features. “Later she will walk the dust, a scarlet girl with her whole stripped skin at her heel, stuck like an old shoe sole or mermaid’s tail”. Simile is used once more to give a shocking image of peeling red skin, being dragged across dust and ash. Assonance is use for “old” and “sole”, and “mermaid’s tail” to really focus on the image being transmitted across to the reader. Specific diction was use to select word like “scarlet” to really give a vivid sight that we could all imagine. This perfectly contradicts what was in the first section, where a pleasant sight could make a 180 and turn south really quick. This flows nicely from the relevance of the first section, where Fell actually shows us what the government and the military could really be hiding from …show more content…

“Later in dreams he will look down shrieking and see ladybirds ladybirds.” The purpose of this passage is to finalise how horrible nuclear warfare is. Assonance is used in “dreams”, “shrieking” and “see” to put emphasis on some of the nouns and verbs for how it had impacted the pilot. The repetition of “ladybirds” focuses on the possible image that the pilot saw: “scarlet” red bodies with “black ash”, the colours of a ladybird. As well as that, “ladybird ladybird” is also a reference to a grim English nursery rhyme, and it goes “ladybird ladybird fly away home, your house is on fire and your children are gone”. The rhyme is incredibly dark, and somehow very relevant and appropriate in the context of nuclear bombs. In the previous section, there was a line “... she will complain ‘Mother you are late, so late’”, and that ties in with the “ladybird ladybird” nursery rhyme how the “Mother” the girl is referring to is in place of the ladybird, but unfortunately didn’t “fly away home” quick enough - perhaps she was caught in the nuclear explosion as well - and now her “children are gone” for real. Maybe this is the reason why military activities are sugar coated before they get exposed to the public. Horrors like this is incredibly bad for one’s mental health, as Fell showed us through the pilot’s dreams, and it is best if we try and

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