To begin, in this cover letter I am revising my Analysis Essay, “Unforgotten Eternal Love” and Argumentative Research Essay, “Nanotechnology” to make it better than before. Hence, first time I did those essays I had clarity/punctuation problems as well as, grammar and paragraph organization. Therefore, I decided to revising them to make it better to get full or more points than first time.
Since, I started revising my two-individual essay I had to change many things. For example, my analysis essay I rewrote the introduction and my thesis sentence. Then, I reorganized my body paragraphs and some of them I rewrote the whole-body paragraph since it didn’t make a since, or didn’t match what I was trying to wrote and in my thesis sentence. Next, my second essay was about nanotechnology and I made some changes in it as well. For example, to make
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Firstly, I need to print out the story which I had analyzed. Then, print my own analysis essay together with my professor’s comments on it and teachers hand out regarding analysis essay about how to do this assignment. Lastly, I needed my peer’s comments next to me. Once, I had done it I needed to read my assignment paper, read my peers comments, reread the story, read my own essay and read my teachers comment so that I knew what to revise. Therefore, I went through all those steps to revise my analysis essay. Next, regarding about my argumentative research essay is little different because I had done a lot of research’s in it. In this essay, I had to print out my annotated bibliography that I had researched about my topic to revise my essay. Then, I need to print my teachers comment with my own annotated bibliography and my assignment packet which was given to me by my professor. When, I had everything ready I knew then it was time to started my revising. That’s, how I did my revising to my both
Over my career of schooling my writing has changed dramatically at times and very little at others. Through my years of schooling people have determined my main weaknesses and strengths that I should work on with my writing. My biggest weakness is writing introductions and conclusions they must be so complicated and require so much thought to be defined as good. I excel at writing body paragraphs and explaining all the facts that back up your main ideas though.
Within this field, I would have to make statements and arguments for different cases or for public issues. Additionally, I would have to use rhetorical analysis to understand concepts and reasons from writer’s articles and journals. Rhetorical analysis would help me since I understand how to use it, I could apply it to the controversial essays that I would have to write in my field. For example, I know that politicians have to understand their counterparts position and explain why they are either for it and against it. The first assignment would be to analyze someone’s stance on a known situation. I know that I would start off the paper by making my argument and that would be my thesis. After that I will set up evidence that is for my position and then I will set up evidence that is against my position. At the end, I will use both evidence to help support the claim that I made in the thesis. In order to revise this paper, I would have to start by making sure my thesis is clear and makes sense. Secondly, I would have to check to see if my evidence is relevant to the topic and that my analysis is well thought out and explains the purpose of the evidence. Therefore, using rhetorical analysis would be a vast help in my success for that specific
Sometimes my professors asked me to write this type of essays. However, I do not think that I wrote them correctly. Because I did not know the structure of this essay. Also, I did not know how to discuss
Over the course of this class I feel like I have become a much better writer. When I go back and look at some of my Journal entries and assignments that I did at the beginning of the semester, I can’t help but tense up at some of the things I wrote. Sometimes the things I was writing didn’t flow well, or I might have even have missed glaring grammar mistakes.
When I read “Proficiency” by Shannon Nichols I really felt for her. I understood and resonated with her story perfectly, especially when she stated “After I failed the test the first time, I began to hate writing and I started to doubt myself. I doubted my ability and the ideas I wrote about.” (83). After I failed my writing assignment I was so embarrassed and didn’t want to write again but obviously, I had to. I always doubt the things I am going to say or which order I am going to organize the essay in. I try so hard to make sure all my sentences are cohesive and all my ideas connect to each other and the main concept but sometimes it just seems that when I keep messing with one little sentence or paragraph I just makes things worse.
The strengths in my writing are my organizational skills, grammatical construct, and my work ethic. Organizing an essay is a very natural process for me. I always follow the basic guidelines for the structure of an essay, which state that one must have an introduction, thesis statement, body, conclusion, and a works cited when needed. The “Are Helicopter Parents Entering the No Fly Zone?” essay, “Animal Cloning—How Unethical Is It?” essay, and the “The Clean Water Act—Is it Successfully Reducing Water Pollution?” essay all have a proper introduction, an informative thesis statement, a body, great conclusions, and works cited pages. Formatting the essays is an integral aspect of organizational skills. Each new paragraph is indented, the font is twelve-point Times New Roman, the sentences are double spaced, and the headers are correct.
When an essay is scattered, it exposes the author’s difficulty to construct the paper which will cause the reader trouble to understand the main ideas of the author. Although there are errors in my introduction and conclusion, my body paragraphs display the organizational patterns that should have been used throughout the essay. For example, paragraph four starts with a clear main point, provides relevant information with two separate examples, and then ends by linking it all to the thesis statement. By providing a well-structured paragraph, the reader was able to read with ease and follow the flow of my idea. When the time comes for writing another timed essay, I will remember to create an essay with easy movement by referring to the M.E.A.L structure.
...more to myself. For instance, I gave more detail about my parents’ divorce and how I felt instead of stating how most children felt after and during divorce like I did in my first draft. I also changed my image to a image that showed my family instead of using the image I first found off of Google, that showed a girl looking out the window while it was raining. I found my second essay, The Day That Changed Everything, to be the easiest essay to write and revise. I thought it was the easiest because I felt like I had a good story to tell with plenty of little details that could be added to make the essay stronger.
As American singer-songwriter Carl Carlton once sang, “From the very start, open up your heart, be a lasting part of everlasting love” (Carlton). Everlasting love is not just the name of a song written in the 60s, nor is it just a fantasy. Though it may not be found in the dictionary, everlasting love is a concept that is undoubtedly attainable. The fields of psychology and science have provided proof of a love that can last a lifetime. Nevertheless, just like with any controversial topic there are critics, but when presented the facts, the right answer is clearly evident.
Such writing requires you to know the criteria or certain expected aspects of a reading (such as thesis, support, genre, or style), and to use standards which are the basis for evaluating. (95) To do so, use your textbooks, especially dialogues, to remind you of what a good argument must include (Ch 1-2). Assignment: What is the difference between You will be required to write a one to two page paper critical analysis of an argumentative article. You will be able to choose any article from the thematic readings in Dialogues. You will need to identify a principle or definition relating to an argument (See Ch. 1.
After revising the introduction, I continue to revised my body paragraphs. There was only one thing I edited in the first body paragraph. In the original essay, there was a sentence where I describe how teenagers are easy target by fake news due to their lack of media literacy skills and emotional appeal. I was told that the sentence was either incomplete or a run on sentence, so I changed it around from saying emotional appeal to easy manipulation. For the
I also make sure to revise the entire essay once everybody writes their parts to make sure that the essay is clear and cohesive and most importantly, that all our points connect back to our
When I write a paper, I usually tend to write and edit at the same time. I could never continue writing without correcting my mistakes and making sure everything seems perfect. However, throughout this course, it made me realize that I should write everything on my mind, when writing a paper, just like I would in my notes. Later on, I should revise and edit my paper, making sure to cut back ideas and sentences that are off topic. Additionally, I’m the type of person that likes to write with no boundaries. Writing my research argument essay, made me realize that I could stick to a structure and yet bend the rules a little bit. When we started with this assignment, I was truly excited to research and write about a topic that I am passionate about. When we were asked to form an outline, I was bummed. I felt like I wasn’t able to form ideas or narrow down my topic, let alone write...
Two days after the West Indies senior men's and women's teams won the ICC T20 World Cup, I drove through the often depressed and violence-edge community of Norwood in Jamaica. Drive-by gang shootings and death, over water catching a cell phone at a roadside restaurant, are all plausible when you venture into a volatile inner-city community such as this.
Has you have already read my midterm reflection, I had a lot improve on. I 'm happy to say I have meet those goals and achievements. I have improve my writing little by little I’m working my way up. In this letter I’m going to mention what I have improved on and what area are indeed of more improvement. I would be mentioning three types of essay: informative report, argument, and an ethnography profile. The informative report was revealed on the importance of college education. I find this topic important because education is something someone should know more about. In the second essay, an argument paper, was on an argument why should the nation work on or improve on the immigration programs. Throughout the argument it mention why it should